Sorry about being so late. Anyway, our story moves on to Ireland, where you have to help to quell the rebellion in a part of Dublin. This is not scripted, so it comes with a two PDFs which explain the scenario.
PS. This is in historical context to fit with our story, there is no preference for either side.
Playability: 4
I thought that your scenario was a lot of fun. I think you could have done somethings differently.
Balance: 4
The player (IRA) was stronger than the opponent.
Creativity: 4
Your entire SAS series is a great idea! Keep up the story line.
Map Design: 3
A bit plain. Also, Dublin is near the ocean, and I didn't see any water.
Story/Instructions: 1
None to speak of.
Additional Comments: You should learn how to script your scenarios. Disabling attrition for example, would be helpful. Its a great overall idea, but I think you just need to put some more thought and care into your work. Overall, a great start!!